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Writer's Tool Bag

HERE IS A SMALL SAMPLING OF SOME OF THE STORIES FROM LAST YEAR'S FIRST GRADERS WRITER'S 
TOOLBAG.  SOON THEY'LL BE REPLACE WITH ALL OF OUR WONDERFUL WRITING FROM THIS YEAR!

Henri Makes a Deal by William 
     In a cave in the Pacific ocean there was a shark named Henri.  He was sad because his 
friends were great jumpers.  He couldn't catch a seal.  He going to his house to practice 
catching and jumping.  He practiced for a hour.  Henri is ready to go to the contest.  At the 
contest he was shy.  He was afraid that he would lose.  It was Henri's turn.  He did not want to 
go so his friend Tim said he would go.  When it was his turn he got two seals.  Henri won the 
contest!  He felt very proud.

What I Like! by Kylie 
     I like ice cream.  I like mom and dad.  I like my bike.  I like Mrs. Kendrick.  I like my 
dog.  I like my brother.  I like my car.  I like toe tokens.  I like soccer.  I like flowers.  I 
like pumpkins.  The end!


Bats by Brenan
     There was a family of 11 bats.  They lived in a box like a tree.  They used echoes to find 
insects to eat.  Their names were Mommy Niki, Spongebob, Brenan, Weststrate, Fly Fly Bat, 
Spongy, Batty, Alex and Patrick.  There was Bear Boss.  He did not like bats.  He did like his 
tow bad guy bats.  Bear Boss and his bad guy bats went to the Bat family house to get them.  
Mommy Niki bit the Bear Boss and the two bad guy bats and they died. The End.


I Love   by Sierra Belz
     I love cheetahs.  I love make-up.  I love my sisters.  I love carving pumpkins.  I love my 
mom.  I love my dad.  I love my friends.  I love macaroni and cheese.  I love spaghettios and 
meatballs.  I love flowers.  I love strawberries.  


Over the Hedge by Nicholas
     In my video game you can be a hedgehog or you can be a turtle.  You can be in a house.  You 
can be in a car.  You can be in hedge.


What I Like by Alyssa
     I went to my grandmas house.  I had fun.  I liked her piano.  I used to play it.  I like 
her dog named Mandy.  She is a cute dog.  I play with her sometimes.  I did words on the 
computer.  I ate dinner.  We had mashed potatoes and applesauce.  It was good.  I had seconds.  
I was coloring in a coloring book.  It was fun.  The End!

Hockey by Wyatt
     I like hockey because it is fun. Hockey uses a stick. Hockey is played on ice.  Hockey uses 
a helmet.  Hockey uses a puck.  Hockey uses ice skates.  Hockey uses protective pads.  The pads 
go on your body.  Hockey uses a net gor scoring goals.  I like hockey!

I Love by Sierra Belz
     I love cheetahs.  I love makeup.  I love my sisters.  I love carving pumpkins.  I love my 
mom.  I love my dad.  I love my friends.  i love macaroni and cheese.  I love Spagettios and 
meatballs.  I love flowers.  I love strawberries.  

Me and My Mom by Douglas
    My mom and I went up the hill.  We got up the hill.  I finially got to the bottom of the 
hill.  I pulled the slide back up the hill.  My mom and I had lots of fun.  The End. 

Sophie the Ballerina by Lindsey
     Sophie was a beautiful ballerina.  She liked to spin.  She could spin very fast.  One day 
she spun so fast she fell over.  Sophie was sad.  But Sophie didn't cry.  She looked up.  She 
stood up and said, "I can do this". She spun around again and she didn't fall this time.  Sophie 
was happy. The End. 

I Wish by Ellie 
     I wish I had a hamster.  I wish summertime would be longer.  I wish I had my own fireworks 
show on my birthday (July 4th). I wish I could play in the clouds.  I wish all people alwas had 
food to eat.  I wish everybody could be happy.  

I Like by Luke
    I like football.  I like Miss Kendrick.  I like school.  I like my class.  I like ice 
cream.  I like my family.  

The Hop Book by Luke
    Frogs can hop.  Rabbits can hop.  People can hop.  Toads can hop.  Grasshoppers can hop.  

The Sad Butterfly by Jaden
     My name is Noel.  I am sad.  I have two friends.  They are being mean to me today.  They 
will not share with me.  But I will share my toys with them.  Then a nice butterfly came along.  
I'm a happy butterfly now.  The End.  

Star Wars by John
    This story is about my Star Wars video game.  My favorite character to play is Darth Vader.  
I like to play his character because he has a light saber.  I use my lightsaber to defeat the 
Rebels and take control of their command post.  This game is sometimes easy, but sometimes it 
can be a little hard because the Rebels hide and go in tunnels.  In the tunnels the Rebels have 
ships and the other characters they use to try and keep me away from the command post.  Then the 
Rebel ship comes we battle until the rebel ship explodes and we achieve victory!  We then take 
over the planet and the game is over.  Then I get to start all over again.  

How to Take Care of a Cat by Kassie 
    You must always feed and water your cat.  You should brush your cat everyday.  You have to 
clean the litter box! Yuck!!!  You should teach your cat how to hunt for mice.  Always make sure 
you have a soft spot for your cat at bedtime.  You should pet and play with your cat everyday.  
Your cat will love you if you give them special treats or milk.  To make sure your cat is 
healthy, you should take them to the vet.  Make sure to keep your cat far away from the bird 
feeder.  The End.  

My Dad and I by Cassidy
     My dad and I like to cuddle.  My dad and I like to sleep.  My dad and I like to write.  My 
dad and I like to snow mobile.  My dad and I like to work.  My dad and I like to swim.  The 
End.


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