We thought it would be neat to take a picture of our school from the window of our portable since we aren't in the building because of the work they are doing to repair fire damage. Take a read of our first descriptive writing!

A Room With a View

On September 17, 2008, when we looked out our window, we saw:

-the white and black paint they put on the outside of our school this summer

-workers on the roof working where the fire was and their equipment

-the bright blue sky

-red and purple cars parked by a fence

-a bright green car with a black stripe

-the red van that brings our lunches

A Room With a View

On October 30, 2008, when we looked out our window, we saw:

Carter- the white frost like a blanket of bright snow on the ground

Anthony- frost as white as a dalmation

Kassy- kids and teachers walking in the school

Kodi- the new paint on the cafeteria the color of vanilla ice cream (look at last month's picture- the cafeteria wall was red!)

Evan- a stop sign as bright as the sun in the sky

Kyle- our school. It's as beautiful as a butterfly.

Maddison- the big, bright cars lined up in a row

Jagger- a white car as white as the clouds

Can you tell we've been working on descriptive language and good word choices?